I think the author included litrpg elements to draw in readers but had no intention of writing a litrpg beyond the bare minimum for amazon to accept it. The only good bit was the meeting with the gods and even that was mostly fueled by the premise the writer had no idea where this was going and its painfully obvious when the most intreasting thing that happens In the book is MC cutting down FOUR trees. people general have a reason for slaughtering a entire village they dont just be like today I'm gonna kill everyone I've lived with for a decade.
The 'twist' was unrealistic and immature no reason just like a 12 year old decided to change up the genre from romance/erotica to detective/thriller. the entire book is effectively trying to sleep with fiona and that's it and I guess some tree chopping but that's about as intresting as watching paint dry so no fun either. The worst part of the book though is the lack of story there basically is none. of course mc eventually makes amends by swearing to do anything she says effectively except less obvious cause slavery might make this more than a snooze fest. This is made even worse because the only reason mc is in the village is to learn about the culture as is said in his deal making her a hypocrite and a vile evil human being. she does not, she swears she never wants to see him again and some other bull. a normal person would let this go explain what he did was wrong and why.
An example would be where mc attempts to compliment fiona it was obviously a compliment but because of 'dumb culture' it's a insult. The mc is a doormat he is effectively indoctrinated the moment he gets into a new world and simply does not understand how he's being used which is frustrating for the reader. I think a more appropriate title for the book would be "Fiona and her cringe slave" RANT.
0 kommentar(er)
